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Paper Planes

by ~angel-in-pieces

Sometimes it feels as if the world is
turning in on itself, and that I too
am curling up, folding away, and

learning how to fly.
For we were all born
from the insides of stars,

spouting words and colourforms
and every shade of moth-backed night imaginable.
Even me and my stitches.

And to stardust we'll return.

Maybe I'll fade through this filtered sunlight,
back to me at five,
discovering the world underwater:

the sun split and scattered across the surface;
the mouths puckered, full of streams; the skin
that flickered and wavered like a mirage

that was not your own. Floating:
that feeling of weightless freedom.
And maybe -

dustclouds opening across my eyes -
I'll be able to come up for air
once more.
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I keep getting urges to write poetry at the moment. I hope to use this opportunity over the holidays to get as much practice in as possible!

Any critique or constructive criticism is more than welcome, as always~
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~520romeo Aug 22, 2010  Student Writer
beautiful language and style :heart:
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~angel-in-pieces Aug 22, 2010  Student Writer
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~smicket Jan 4, 2010  Student Artist
:O Love this one! Wasn't sure if the 3-line stanzas would work, but they totally do.

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Gerard, Gerard, there's something in the tent Gerard...
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~angel-in-pieces Jan 4, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you, smicket! ♥
I didn't originally use three-line stanzas, actually, they just kind of happened in the end. But I think it turned out better that way. :)

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I am as tall as my shadow, tall as stories... ♥
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~smicket Jan 6, 2010  Student Artist
Oh yeah, I like it like that. I'm glad it did turn out that way!

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Gerard, Gerard, there's something in the tent Gerard...
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such images here; lovely ebb and flow in the backbone of this piece.

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ar·ti·fice (är'tə-fĭs) n.
1. an artful or crafty expedient; a stratagem.
2. subtle but base deception; trickery.
3. cleverness or skill; ingenuity.


i refuse to conform to nonconformity.
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~angel-in-pieces Jan 3, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it~ :hug:

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I am as tall as my shadow, tall as stories... ♥
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