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After the wet season, before
the midsummer night's drought,
I flight for the floodplains, where
the northern downpour bleeds out
and sweeps its love to the mouth
of my lungs. I sleep in the crux
of an oxbow, let my dreams flux
and flow fractured, deltaic. For this
is the way I piece myself apart,
a resolution, my absolution
in a new avulsion.

During the day, I move south
towards the river mouth, picking
pebbles, coral fangs from the riverbed.
A loose tooth is a common truth
in these parts. Bones are febrile,
eyelashes are made of chalk, salt.
Tears turn brackish. They cake
and crack on the flats of my hands.

This is my Pangaea,
this swollen geography,
this slacken land.
The point of no return.

Here, all else ends.

By dusk I meet the saltmarsh
and dehusk, grow halophytic
in the nightlight. I pull out
my hair, my fingernails, and
fill the gaps in my spine
with reed rhythms, saline.
The final rite: turning flesh to grass.

Tomorrow, morning mist
will drag the whitewash back,
ashes to ash.

And I will walk the water,
with a pocketful of stones
and something new to throw
beneath the glass.
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edit: Wow, a DD?! That's incredible. Thank you so much to everyone who has :+fav:'d or commented - and especially to ^lightningmonkey who featured me. You're all amazing :heart:


Spite is a dangerous vice, but I still think I'd rather crucify than learn.
I hope this hurts like it's supposed to. As much as you hurt me.

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Let's play spot the obscure literary / lyrical / geographical reference! Any excuse to indulge my love of random geographical terminology... :la:
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~Albalannae Oct 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Geography is such an interesting subject. Not only are the names very fun to say, the way the words themselves are spelled makes sentences using them very pleasurable to read. This is a well deserved DD, and I must watch you so I can read your other works. If they're anything like this then I know I'm in for a treat! :squee: :+fav:
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~angel-in-pieces Nov 1, 2011  Student Writer
It really is - there's such a wonderful language of geography, one that really captures the landscapes and imagery of it all, as well as the science and process. The imagery in this was partly inspired by my study of it, I have to say. (:
Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it. :tighthug:
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Mood: Zest ~Albalannae Nov 1, 2011  Student General Artist
I really think that the names came into being from those people who really -saw- the beauty in the land around them. Plus the words are just fun to say, they are very full and roll off the tongue! I'm excited to see what else you write in the future! :squee:
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THIS...is incredible. :) Thank you for sharing. :) I love it.
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~angel-in-pieces Nov 1, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it. :hug:
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I think it's awesome. :)
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~angel-in-pieces Nov 2, 2011  Student Writer
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This is so intensely of the earth, it's impossible to tease out the
person from the rich land and waterscape. Such a strong voice,
such a churning, vivid scene upon scene.
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~angel-in-pieces Nov 1, 2011  Student Writer
That's a wonderful reading of it! Thank you :heart:
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~girlwhosangtheblues Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. Maybe one of the best poems I've read this year- including published poets.
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